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So, I've written a few poems and I feel as if they aren't as good as they could be. Can someone(or a bunch of people) please comment on these poems telling me what you think of them and what you think could improve them? Please
Poems:
You - fav.me/d5iadie
Scar - fav.me/d5fgh2y
Smile - fav.me/d5j3xig
Don't Leave - forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
Nature's Play - fav.me/d4e4cfv
A Confession On This Day Of Commercialized Love - fav.me/d4p0aqg
And of course, feel free to check out the rest of my work forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
Poems:
You - fav.me/d5iadie
Scar - fav.me/d5fgh2y
Smile - fav.me/d5j3xig
Don't Leave - forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
Nature's Play - fav.me/d4e4cfv
A Confession On This Day Of Commercialized Love - fav.me/d4p0aqg
And of course, feel free to check out the rest of my work forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
Aahhhhh
I freakin' hate having writer's/drawer's block. I can never have them at opposite times, it's never that when I have drawer's block, I can still write and vise versa. Its so fuckin' annoying.
Perfect
So, my ex says that me and the person I'm currently dating are perfect together. And my girlfriend's ex told me that we(me and my gf) are perfect together.
When the people that once told you to kill yourself for hurting them tell you that you are perfect with the person you're dating, then you know that you and your gf/bf have the gods on your side.
So, Jord( http://jordthepokemonmaster.deviantart.com/ ), the gods are on your side, what do ya think of that?
Fake Friends
There are some people who are getting too fake here on dA. They only want posts, comments, or to see how many friends they can get. Soo let's see who will actually re-post this. This is a test to see who's paying attention. This is a test to see how many people in my friends list actually pay attention to me. Copy and re-post in your own bulletin. Let's see who the true friends are and I think I know who you are... Re-post this if you are a friend... Just copy and paste this in a new bulletin as "Fake Friends''
"Fake Friends" Uses Other people...That's why i hate them....NOW GO REPOST THIS!!! NOW!!!! >.
Bullies
Stolen from ~Sarahxoxox
The boy you punched in the hall today.
Committed suicide a few minutes ago.
That girl you called a slut in class today.
She's a virgin.
The boy you called lame.
He has to work every night to support his family.
That girl you pushed down the other day.
She's already being abused at home.
That girl you called fat.
She's starving herself.
The old man you made fun of cause of the ugly scars.
He fought for our country.
The boy you made fun of for crying.
His mother is dying.
You think you know them.
Guess what?
You don't!
Re-post if you are against bullying.
I bet 99% of you won't, but re
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