Poetry

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So, I've written a few poems and I feel as if they aren't as good as they could be. Can someone(or a bunch of people) please comment on these poems telling me what you think of them and what you think could improve them? Please

Poems:
You  - fav.me/d5iadie
Scar - fav.me/d5fgh2y
Smile - fav.me/d5j3xig
Don't Leave - forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
Nature's Play - fav.me/d4e4cfv
A Confession On This Day Of Commercialized Love - fav.me/d4p0aqg

And of course, feel free to check out the rest of my work forgottensoldierpal.deviantart…
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